The monstrosity dragged itself across the cold linoleum floor. Gritting his teeth, Carter watched it draw closer, watched its mouth working at words through a palpating mess of blood and gore. A raspy hiss, slurred and husky, a sound like cutter but more familiar, percussed by a sickening snick of teeth on bone. It was trying to say his name. Carter tightened his grip, shut his eyes and hove the axe hard against his wife’s once white neck, severing the life they’d made. ‘I’ll always love you, Sunshine,’ he whispered into the silence. There would never be another future.
Good. Creepy, but good.
Thanks man, either would be fine but both is great.
Indeed scary,with those few words itself it was hair -raising !
By the way, if possible please read/comment my short story Final destination
Thanks. I’d be happy to read your piece if you can tell me how to find it
Oh!
I thought you can see it in my profile
Anyway, the link is here
http://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/love-short-story-final-destination/
Hove! Love it.