The monstrosity dragged itself across the cold linoleum floor. Gritting his teeth, Carter watched it draw closer, watched its mouth working at words through a palpating mess of blood and gore. A raspy hiss, slurred and husky, a sound like cutter but more familiar, percussed by a sickening snick of teeth on bone. It was trying to say his name. Carter tightened his grip, shut his eyes and hove the axe hard against his wife’s once white neck, severing the life they’d made. ‘I’ll always love you, Sunshine,’ he whispered into the silence. There would never be another future.
Nic
Nic Addenbrooke is a freelance writer, editor, content creator, radio broadcaster, part-time poet and sometimes artist. Nic has been coming to terms with existence for years. He currently lives and works in Brisbane where he struggles to turn the cacophony of voices in his head into things of substance. It doesn’t always work but occasionally produces a nice veneer of sanity.
20/01/2013 at 00:12
Good. Creepy, but good. 🙂
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20/01/2013 at 00:26
Thanks man, either would be fine but both is great.
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20/01/2013 at 03:55
Indeed scary,with those few words itself it was hair -raising !
By the way, if possible please read/comment my short story Final destination
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20/01/2013 at 09:52
Thanks. I’d be happy to read your piece if you can tell me how to find it 🙂
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22/01/2013 at 19:17
Oh! 😮 I thought you can see it in my profile
Anyway, the link is here
http://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/love-short-story-final-destination/
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20/01/2013 at 09:56
Hove! Love it.
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